Hello World By: Ladybug

Hi world my name is Carina,


         Let me tell me how I came to mars.   So it was just a beautiful day then I was saw some kids where disapiring at school so I was wondering how they are disapiring so  then i went to a forest like a type of cave but it was night and prrrrrr then got me and then they got me and took me to mars and thats how i got to Mars.


  The end

Comments

  1. I wonder what the prrrr sound was? Was it a machine, like a helicopter? Or, was it more like an animal? Are you in the colony or are you with the Martians.

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  2. Good job carina i like how you added affects to your story i give you a 4

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  3. wow good job carina or should i say ladybug good job giving detail of where you got token

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  4. I agree with u Marissa and Sherlyn, you made a very good job.

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